One thought on “380: Evaluation and results PgCert to date

  1. jmorganltpa says:

    Results and Evaluation of Results.
    Some really thorough and insightful work here Claire – very well done. I have several comments which will help to tidy this up and make it suitable for submission:
    1. identify which aspects should be contained within Analysis of Data and which should appear in Project Conclusions and Recommendations. Currently there seems to be a mix of the two.
    2. Watch your word count – it is currently over the required amount
    3. In order to make the Analysis of Data section easier to assess please list your main question and sub aims again at the start of the section. This will save any examiner having to constantly refer to the Proposal.
    4. Some of your sentences can be a bit clipped, so please go back over your writing and try to create a better sense of narrative flow e.g. Dancers turnout was not significantly greater than non-dancers before or after stretching. This suggested, dancers were near maximum turnout.
    THIS READS BETTER AS FOLLOWS:
    Dancers’ turnout was not significantly greater than non-dancers before or after stretching suggesting dancers were near maximum turnout.

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